Please don't GO?

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 4:45:23

You came to me. You were down in the dumps.
You were suffering from brueses and bumps. I held you in my arms. I told you there would be no harm.
You felt like everything inside of you was dying.
I told you to keep trying. You tried and tried, but you still cry.
The light in you is dark. You wanna fight for the light that you need. but you can't fight for the light.
You look at me so weak, but yet you can't speak. Is what you suffer from is fear? I hold you so dear to me as a friend, but yet you have fear beyond fear. Your tears are to many to count. You just lie there shaking. Your heart is breaking.

So my dear friend. I know you may give up. It does show.
But please don't Go?

Post 2 by starfly (99956) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 4:50:18

hum... whowl :) I feel this one.

Post 3 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 4:58:35

Wow Carie, that's good.

Post 4 by gummybear16 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 5:14:50

thanks bridgette and Daniel...

Post 5 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 15:29:46

wOW cARRIE ::: THAT MIS A GREAT ONE: iT REMINDED ME OF WHEN i WAS WEAK AND CRYING ::: AND i WISHED THERE WAS SOMEONE THERE: iT IS GREAT; REALLY
hUGS:

Post 6 by kev (Zone BBS Addict) on Sunday, 17-Jul-2005 16:22:41

that was good karrie

Post 7 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Monday, 18-Jul-2005 4:06:38

I really felt like that once. Like the sad one I mean.

Post 8 by zackmack2000 ( extreme killer of the keys) on Tuesday, 19-Jul-2005 6:19:48

Oh my god Karie how emotional!

Post 9 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 20-Jul-2005 4:57:04

Lol I think poems should be emotional.

Post 10 by snowflake (Veteran Zoner) on Friday, 22-Jul-2005 6:43:01

thanks for the poems. it means so much on a friendship.

Post 11 by Nem (I just keep on posting!) on Friday, 22-Jul-2005 11:00:48

snap snap! Lighter flick lighter flick!